If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho
by Sappho
Assigned by 3 of the 9 reading lists
What survives of the lyric poet of Lesbos, who wrote around 600 BCE for the lyre and was ranked by the ancients as the tenth Muse. Of nine books only one complete poem remains, the Hymn to Aphrodite, together with a few hundred fragments quoted by later writers or recovered from papyrus, some a line long, some a single word. The poems address Aphrodite, the girls of Sappho's circle, weddings, absent friends and old age, and fragment 31, on watching the woman she loves talk to a man, is among the most imitated poems in the world.
We recommendIf Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho, translated by Anne CarsonVintage, 2003Every fragment with the Greek facing, brackets marking what is lost; the edition most programs assign.
Also goodcompare
- Diane J. Rayor. Includes the fragments recovered since 2004, with an introduction by André Lardinois on what we do and do not know about her.
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- Written
- c. 600 BCE
- Form
- Lyric poetry
- Language
- Greek
- Length
- Medium · 400 pp120 to 300 pages
- Difficulty
- Moderate2 of 5 for a first-year reader
Why it's on the list
Sappho is the first person in European literature to write about what desire feels like from inside. Homer describes what people do; Sappho reports a body coming apart, the tongue breaking, a fire under the skin, sweat, trembling, and the sensation of being close to death, and she does it in the first person and in the present tense. Fragment 31 has been imitated and translated for two and a half thousand years, by Catullus, by Racine, by Tennyson, by Anne Carson. She also gave the language two words, sapphic and lesbian, both derived from her rather than from anything she says. What survives is almost nothing: one complete poem out of nine books, and a few hundred scraps, many of them quoted by grammarians who wanted an example of an unusual verb.
Key themes
- Love and desire
- Desire in Sappho is physical, specific and painful. Her word for it is a compound meaning sweet-bitter, in that order, and she describes it as a creature against which nothing can be done.
- Art and beauty
- Fragment 16 argues a thesis: some say an army is the most beautiful thing on earth, and she says it is whatever one loves, and offers Helen as the proof, since Helen chose.
- The self and identity
- The poems are addressed to particular named women in particular rooms, and the emotion is reported as symptoms rather than declared. That specificity is what makes them feel modern.
- Death and mortality
- The Tithonus poem, recovered from a papyrus in 2004, is about her own ageing: knees that will not carry her, hair gone white, and the myth of the man granted deathlessness without youth.
Which translation to read
For If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho the translation is most of the decision. Our pick is the Anne Carson translation; the other is good for different reasons.
Our pick
If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho, translated by Anne Carson
Vintage, 2003
Every fragment with the Greek facing, brackets marking what is lost; the edition most programs assign.
Amazon: the Anne Carson translation, opens in a new tabBookshop.org: the Anne Carson translation, opens in a new tab
Also good
Sappho, A New Translation of the Complete Works, translated by Diane J. Rayor
Cambridge University Press, 2014
Includes the fragments recovered since 2004, with an introduction by André Lardinois on what we do and do not know about her.
Amazon: the Diane J. Rayor translation, opens in a new tabBookshop.org: the Diane J. Rayor translation, opens in a new tab
Overview
Reading Sappho means reading damage. She wrote nine books of lyric poetry around 600 BCE on Lesbos, in the Aeolic dialect, for performance to the lyre. Of that, one poem survives entire. Everything else is fragments: lines quoted by later writers, usually because the grammarian wanted to illustrate a rare word, and scraps of papyrus recovered from Egyptian rubbish heaps, some of which have been torn or cut so that only the middle of each line remains.
The standard numbering comes from Eva-Maria Voigt’s edition, and modern translations use it, so fragment 31 means the same poem in Carson as in Rayor.
The losses keep changing. In 2004 a papyrus supplied most of what is now called the Tithonus poem, about old age. In 2014 two more substantially complete poems appeared, though their provenance turned out to be badly compromised and the scholarly community has since treated them with great caution. The corpus is not stable.
How a translator handles the gaps changes the reading entirely. Anne Carson’s If Not, Winter prints the Greek opposite and marks every lacuna with square brackets, so you see the poems as ruins. Others supply plausible words and give you something smoother and less accurate. Both are defensible; know which you have.
What happens
The one complete poem. Fragment 1, the Hymn to Aphrodite, survives because Dionysius of Halicarnassus quoted it entire as an example of polished style. Sappho calls on Aphrodite for help, and the goddess arrives in a chariot drawn by sparrows, smiling, and asks what is wrong this time, whom Sappho wants now, and who is to be persuaded. She promises that the reluctant one will pursue, will give gifts, will love against her will. The poem’s charm is the goddess’s exasperated familiarity: this has happened before and will happen again.
Fragment 31. The most influential poem in the collection and one of the most influential in any language. The speaker watches a man sitting opposite a woman, listening to her talk and laugh, and calls him godlike. Then the symptoms: the heart shaking, the voice gone, the tongue broken, a thin fire running under the skin, the eyes seeing nothing, the ears drumming, cold sweat, trembling, greener than grass, and the sense of being a little short of dying.
What makes it new is that it is a clinical report. Homer’s characters have emotions described from outside; this is a body described from within by the person inside it. Catullus translated it into Latin, Longinus quoted it as the example of how to select and combine details, and it has been rewritten ever since. It breaks off unfinished, and nobody knows whether the last stanza is lost or whether the break is the poem.
Fragment 16. The most argued-over. It opens with a priamel: some say cavalry is the most beautiful thing on the black earth, some infantry, some ships, but I say it is whatever a person loves. Then the argument: Helen, the most beautiful of all, left the best of husbands and sailed to Troy, and was led by love. Then the turn to the particular, to Anactoria who is absent, whose step and bright face Sappho would rather see than all the chariots of the Lydians and armed infantry.
It is worth noticing how the poem is built. It states a general thesis, supports it from myth, and lands on one absent woman, which is the opposite of the epic movement from a person to a war.
The Tithonus poem. Recovered in 2004 and now the clearest thing we have on Sappho and age. She tells the girls to take the gifts of the Muses and the lyre, and says her own knees no longer carry her, that once she danced like a fawn, and that her hair has gone white. Then the myth: Eos took Tithonus, asked for him to be made deathless, forgot to ask for youth, and he aged forever at the edge of the world. There is no consolation offered.
The rest. A few hundred pieces. Wedding songs, sometimes bawdy, with the bridegroom compared to a war god and the bride to a quince left on the highest branch that the pickers could not reach. Addresses to named women: Atthis, Gongyla, Anactoria. Quarrels with a rival called Andromeda. Short things of a line or two that are among the best: the moon and the Pleiades set and the speaker lying alone; a description of desire as a sweet-bitter creature nothing can be done about; the wind falling on oaks. Some are a single word.
How to read it
Read Carson’s If Not, Winter first. The bracketed gaps are honest and they force you to read what is actually there.
Read fragment 31 several times and then read Catullus 51, which is a translation of it, and notice what a Roman did with the last stanza.
Do not try to reconstruct a biography. Almost everything traditionally said about Sappho comes from much later sources with agendas: that she ran a school, that she threw herself off a cliff for love of a ferryman, that she was ugly. Ancient comedy invented a great deal of it. What we have is poems addressed to women, by a woman, in a society where women’s poetry was performed among women, and pressing beyond that is guesswork.
Take the fragments as fragments. A modern ear, trained on imagism, finds a two-word scrap beautiful in ways Sappho did not intend, and it is worth being aware that some of the effect is the accident of loss.
Read her against Homer, who is the other thing Greek poetry was. Fragment 16 is a direct argument with the epic scale of value, and it wins on its own terms.
Questions it raises
- Is fragment 31 about jealousy of the man, desire for the woman, or the experience of desire as such? The poem does not say, and the man is never mentioned again.
- Fragment 16 argues that beauty is whatever one loves. Is that a theory of value, or a refusal to have one?
- How much of Sappho’s modern effect comes from the fragmentation? Would complete poems be better?
- The poems are addressed to named women in specific circumstances. What is lost by reading them as universal love poetry?
- The biography is almost entirely invention by later writers. Why has so much been invented about her in particular?
- Nine books became one poem and some scraps. What does it mean to call someone a major poet on this evidence?
Highlights
He seems to me equal to the gods, that man who sits opposite you and hears you speaking sweetly and laughing. It makes the heart in my breast take flight.
Paraphrase of the opening. The poem continues through the physical symptoms, tongue broken, fire under the skin, eyes blind, ears ringing, and breaks off mid-thought.
Some say an army of horsemen, some of foot soldiers, some of ships, is the most beautiful thing on the black earth; but I say it is whatever one loves.
Paraphrase of the priamel, a form in which alternatives are listed in order to be set aside for the speaker's own answer.
Sweet-bitter creature against which nothing can be done.
Paraphrase. Sappho's compound puts sweet first and bitter second, which translators routinely reverse into bittersweet, changing the order of the experience.
The moon has set, and the Pleiades; it is midnight, the time is going by, and I lie down alone.
Paraphrase. The attribution to Sappho is uncertain and it is printed among her fragments in most editions.


